Guide · Pitching

How to pitch a journalist

Most pitches are deleted from the subject line and the first two sentences. Reporters are not looking for reasons to say no. They are looking for a story that fits what they cover, from someone who has clearly read their work. Here is what they actually read, and how to write a pitch that gets past the first glance.

The short version

  1. Pick the reporter, not the outlet. Find the person who has written about your space in the last few months.
  2. Write the subject line as a headline the reporter could plausibly run. Specific, plain, no hype.
  3. Put the news in the first sentence. What happened, to whom, and why it matters now.
  4. Keep it under 150 words. One story, one angle, the facts that prove it.
  5. Show you know their beat in one line that refers to something they wrote.
  6. Send it yourself, from your own inbox, as plain text.
  7. Follow up once, with something new. Then move on.

What a reporter reads, in order

A reporter on a busy beat can get many pitches a day. Each one gets a few seconds before it is read properly or deleted. In that time, they look at three things:

  1. Who it is from. A founder writing in their own name reads differently from an agency blast. Your name and title should be obvious.
  2. The subject line. If it reads like marketing, most reporters stop here.
  3. The first two sentences. This is where they decide whether there is a story for their readers. If the news is in paragraph three, they never reach it.

Everything else in the pitch exists to back up those first lines with facts the reporter can check.

Step 1: Find the right reporter

The most common reason a good pitch fails is that it went to the wrong person. A reporter who covers consumer apps will not write about your logistics software, however good the pitch is.

Ten well-chosen reporters beat a list of five hundred. A pitch that fits one reporter's beat exactly is worth more than the same pitch sent to everyone.

Step 2: Find the story in your news

Your launch or funding round is news to you. To a reporter, it is a story only if it says something about a bigger trend, a real problem, or a change in a market their readers care about. Before you write, answer these:

If you can answer the last question in one sentence, that sentence is probably your opening line.

Step 3: Write the subject line

Write it like a headline the reporter could run. Plain and specific beats clever.

Step 4: Write the pitch

A structure that works for most founder pitches:

  1. The news, in one sentence. What happened and why it matters now.
  2. Why this reporter. One line that connects it to something they have written.
  3. The proof. Two or three facts with numbers or names: customers, growth, funding, data.
  4. What you can offer. An interview, data they can use, a customer who will talk, early access.
  5. Your name, title and how to reach you.

Keep it under 150 words, in plain text, with no attachments. Put links in the body if they help, and a press kit link at the bottom if you have one.

A before-and-after example

Here is a typical first draft, and the same pitch rewritten. The company, people and numbers are invented for illustration.

Fernway, Maya Chen, "Dana" and all figures in this example are fictional.

What changed

Timing and follow-up

Mistakes that get pitches deleted

Do you need a publicist?

Not to send a good pitch. Reporters want to hear from the person who built the company. What a good publicist knows is which reporter covers your space and what story they want. You can learn both by reading closely, and by keeping your list short.

Start with the right reporter

Describe your company in one sentence and see the 3 reporters most likely to cover it, with the angle to pitch each one. Free, no card. You send every pitch yourself, from your own inbox.

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Related

No pitch guarantees coverage. Reporters decide what to write, and the best pitch still depends on the right story at the right time.